Well, that sounds pessimistic! Truly, I’m jumping up and down for joy (well, sagging tired in my chair) because I’m DONE with BREAKING POINT. I sent the draft off to my editor at the same time I lamented my miserable process.
I love my muse, but she’s a total bitch.
It took me more than two full months to write the first 85,000 words of BREAKING POINT. And 3 days to write the last 25,000+ words. I have had some 10K+ days, but they are few and far between and NEVER two in a row. In fact, usually when I have a writing day that exceeds about 5K words, the next day or two are sluggish.
On Friday, I was in Oregon with my darling daughter for a softball tournament. I brought my book to work on because it was mostly done, but I needed to flesh things out and work on the ending, which was very rough. I started reading the book from beginning to end and editing what I had. By the time I left Oregon on Monday, I had 83K words and about halfway done with the editing part. On the 4th of July I worked all day (taking a break to BBQ around 6, then calling it quits at 9 to do fireworks with the kids.) I had 87K words but had finished editing what I had … except my ending was awful. I don’t know what I was thinking, but as I edited the book, I realized the ending was boring and contrived and it just wasn’t working for me. Not to mention that it wasn’t finished — I had the scenes there, but no details (often my first drafts I skip description, dialogue tags, etc because I write fast, and all that is editing layers into the story.)
Wednesday morning I sat down with all my notes and rewrote the entire ending, going back and forth to different parts of the book so I could add or delete scenes. At the end of the day I had 97K words. On Thursday night, I went to bed with 103K words and really thought I was almost done. And I sat down Friday morning early … at 6 a.m. … and ended up writing straight through until 1 pm working on a much better ending and ending with 113K words.
BREAKING POINT IS DONE!
I think most writers curse their process. I used to say that it took me twice as long to write the first 150 pages than it takes me to write the last 300 pages … and yet, my editor almost always has more comments and revision notes in the first act than the rest of the book. Go figure.
But typing # # # or THE END when you’re DONE — even if you know you’ll be going back and doing revisions (and actually looking forward to it) is one of the most exciting, happiest, satisfying moments in a writers life.
So we celebrate.
And the best thing? I had absolutely no idea what Lucy Kincaid #14 was going to be about even though it’s due before Thanksgiving, but when I neared the end of BREAKING POINT, I got a little teeny tiny idea spark and I think … finally, Noah (who does not make an appearance in BP) will finally get a happily ever after. I think. I hope. We’ll see.
Well, and the next best thing … an amazing cover I love. I hope you love the cover … and the book … as much as I do 🙂
Bella Caruso survived a nightmare of abuse and betrayal. Today, she has dedicated her life to saving other young women from the hell that almost killed her―first as an officer of the law, then by stepping outside the law and into the darkness where true evil dwells. Now, it appears that the darkness has taken her once again.
JT Caruso often worries about his sister, given her line of work. This time, when he learns that Bella is working undercover to find a missing girl involved in a dangerous prostitution ring, JT asks FBI Special Agent Lucy Kincaid for help.
Even with Lucy’s extensive experience in running down human traffickers, finding Bella will not be easy. Not only because she is in too deep. But because Bella, who will not rest until she saves the girl, doesn’t want to be found…
Allison Brennan is a New York Times and USA Today bestselling author of nearly three dozen romantic thrillers and mysteries, including the Lucy Kincaid series and the Max Revere series. She lives in Northern California with her husband, five children, and assorted pets.
Sounds exciting. Anxiously awaiting the release.
Bob and Sharon
Hugs! Thank you! 🙂
Can’t wait! Looks like another great story written by Allison Brennan 🙂
It was a thrill to write another strong female character into Lucy’s series. I suspect Bella will be around awhile 🙂
I hope book 14 is about Noah..he definitely deserves his happy ending too!
I have an idea. But I have to see if I can develop it a bit more. I think he’s going to return to working for Rick after having a six-month sabbatical, but I need a strong story for him. I really thought that Nate and Bella might have a shot, but they barely even are on the same page in BP and Bella is not at a place in her life (in BP) where she can think about a relationship. But in a few months? Hmm. It’s on my mind 🙂
Anxiously waiting…. love your books! I truly appreciate all you do.
Thanks Dee!
I <3 you. Just sayin'… And Lucy. And JT. Noah. (Yay for a maybe HEA). Love the premise of this book and I'm totally on board for when it releases!
Also, your process gives me hope. Off to work now.
My process sucks! But the book is done, so that’s a plus 😉
I can’t wait!
Another book to look forward to! Also can’t wait to find out what’s in store for Noah, my favorite character in the series who isn’t a Kincaid or Rogan. And really getting excited for Shattered!
Oooh, another Lucy book. Yay!
I just sent my latest book to my editor. Finally. I realized I had to stop looking at it and just send it in. Boy, what a relief that was. Should have done it weeks ago! 🙂
It’s always a great thing to send a book off!
Cann’t wait to read as I Love All Your Books. Hope you are having a Great Summer.
Do you have an estimated publication date? I like to get them on my calendar as soon as possible.
Hi Alison! Sorry I’m so late in responding, I just got back from Thrillerfest and have been catching up!
BREAKING POINT will be out January 30 2018. 🙂
Love this and am looking forward to the next book inthe series. Onemy go to series to enjoy when I need that crime/mystery fix 🙂
I just discovered these books and The Lost Girls.was the first book I’ve read. I loved it!!! Is there a list which they are listed in order written as they are not all numbered.
Hi Barbara: Here’s the Lucy Kincaid series in order: http://www.allisonbrennan.com/lucy-kincaid-series
Plus, if you go to my books page you’ll see all my books! I need to do a bit of updating on my website … probably in the next week or two.
Looking forward to this book. You’re an awesome writer, that I love to read.
Looking forward to this book. You’re an awesome writer, that I love to read.